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silver manuscript critique

Brutally Honest Manuscript Critique

If you want to be a successful writer then you need to know if your work is any good.

It’s nice that your mom likes your work, it’s cute that your girlfriend/boyfriend thinks you are brilliant but will your story hold a reader’s attention, make them feel involved, like the characters?

Readers will only give you a page or two to grab their interest. If they could care less about your characters, if they don’t understand what’s happening, or are just bored they’ll put your book down and never pick it up again.

If you’re looking to be a better writer then you need an honest critique No sugarcoating, no punches pulled. Just honest critique and suggestions on how to tighten up your story, give characters more depth, and make your reader beg for more.

I will point out signs of weak writing, repetition, and provide tips on how to improve your story and you as a writer. I don’t format, correct spelling, or grammar that is not what this is about. It’s about making your book tight and able to hold the reader’s interest.

ravensmarc manuscript critique

Brutally Honest Manuscript Critique

“The Silver PACKAGE

Best for a single chapter- brief action scene or sequence up to 2500 words (12 point double spaced). This will be a deconstructive critique pointing out exactly where your weaknesses lie and what you can do to make them better.

Special Pricing $75


This is a manuscript review – I’ll do a quick read-through to identify any major problems, boring parts that need trimming, conclusions that can be made stronger, suggestions for rewrites, plot improvements, and problems. I will make comments on your story arc and structural analysis, rewriting sentences, improving word choice, organization, plotting, and pacing.

I will also include suggestions on how to make your dialogue stronger, the action tighter, and the characters more believable.

Anything that can’t be easily fixed, I will add a comment on possible suggestions for the rewrite.

Up to 10,000 words (12 point double spaced).

Special Pricing $250