This is a manuscript review – I’ll do a quick read-through to identify any major problems, boring parts that need trimming, conclusions that can be made stronger, suggestions for rewrites, plot improvements, and problems. I will make comments on your story arc and structural analysis, rewriting sentences, improving word choice, organization, plotting, and pacing.
I will also include suggestions on how to make your dialogue stronger, the action tighter, and the characters more believable.
Anything that can’t be easily fixed, I will add a comment on possible suggestions for the rewrite.
Up to 10,000 words (12 point double spaced).